This boy didnt want to go on living
knowing he would cry everynight
knowing that everday trying to
stay alive was just one big fight
that stanzas my fav. ok but anyways great poem it had an assum concept but at some point didnt quit flow all the way and rhyme is indefferent sometimes its there others its not?? o well good ne ways!!
~~Sweetie

This is GREAT

That was really good and moving..

Aw... dang! lol thats ill i have to say!

Okay Mr. you totally put me off that four parter thing cause personally.....I dont like long poems.. *cough like this one Cough* lol Lol wooooooot comment wars* dances* ummmmmm yeh uh... pie! no uh, what was I gonna say OH whats with darling thing,... everyone calls me it and im like...okay granny? lol its cute but...yeh I was gonne say kinky but after the granny comment that would be bad right? right. Well her final poem is kinda my mentality as of late... cause ive been dealing with alot and yeh well yeh lol. if that makes ANY sense! so yeh sorry im working on an essay so my brains like mush right now! so i best be off! seeee you uhmmmm Sweetie? lol

PSH my heart thing died *cries*

< 3 JENN muahaha WORRRRRRRRK :D