5/5 Great poem! u did a very good writing it.

Don't look at me
I'm not a beauty, I never will be
My smile is broken

I LOVE IT! .. i love that line... i just do. Good Job!

This was... interesting. my favorite lines were "I'm not as good as I should be, I can't keep up with what's expected"... because i know how it feels to feel that way... to never feel good enough... when all the girls around are so much prettier and my sister is so much smarter, ya know? i can definately feel the emotion and the point your trying to create in this poem. But seriously... you should love yourself, love who you are who cares how smooth your skin is or who does/doesnt except you, your you and thats all you need to be. -jen-