This sounds so sad I love it though

Sad, but well written. I liked it 5/5

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Absolutely amazing! your writings never seem stagnant. with each one you post, your talent blossoms and flourishes greater than before!
i especially liked these two lines:
"You gave me new pain to feel.
I'm still a slave to what I thought was real."
its like you were trying so hard to want a thing that was not there, and when it was realized, a feeling so devestating came over you, and the thing was the cause.
amazing peice! i truly loved it!
keep writing, and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
*AntiSocial16*
ps: if u have aim, please im me sumtime! id love to talk to you! my sn is SmileBackTears