Oh my god, i'm completely speechless. This poem is magnificent and the way you wrote it just touched my soul. A heartfelt poem indeed. Great job once again. 5/5

Great poem! i felt that the ending really brought it to justice. 5/5

~Kimmy~

Damn .... that was deep. There is a storm that rages in all of us. Its up to us to keep it at bay. Comment on my Revised poem of Death.. Thanx Bin

Wow! that poem brought a tear to my eye. beautiful

Hey just returning the favor of the comment you left, your writing is really good as well. your writing is different than mine, but thats what poetry is right, the differences. i dont know, its really good though, i hope to raed more from ya, ttyl

So powerful and sad and the ending is perfect, fabulous write! Great job!

Hey I like this one!! But damn it's a dark story there huh?? Anyways take care k..

Woww thats greaat !
i really like the ending.
5 out of 5 .

Omg thats amazing. i love the ending. how ironic.

Wow!! that is all i can say!!

Thats a gr8 poem i loved the ending