Hewwo.
Sweet poem indeed.
I really enjoyed the beginning about letting love fly by like a peice of wrapper, very creative and nice.

I liked how in the poem you celebrated the fact you lfound love and I think if you broke it into a steadyer flow it would be a much more easy read.

But all in all, the ending was very sweet and I enjoyed the poem.

Young Love,so nice =]

Well done.
Keep it up.
And Try a nice new flow next time =P

Lisa.x