Gd poem, quite simple thou maybe u could develpe it and put more feeling into it, pour ur feelings into it, it lets u feel better and allows u to write a masterpiece.

i do no wt ur talking about tho and in that sense it is a gd poem. i can relate. 4/5, i cant give it a 5 cuz there is no feeling. let me no if u write other poems cuz i started on this site like this but as i wrote more my poems became more my style and more develped(read girl in the mirror or im sorry i never told u or even my newest one bout life)if you could return the favour and vote and comment on some of my poems i'll return the favour again. anyway take care and let me no if u write anymore.

I really did enjoy the poem. I'm kinda going through something like that right now so I really liked that.