Wow thats a really moving poem...great job 5/5
thanks for commenting on mine!!
~cassandra~

So much power within this poem Natalie , you are so correct it is time for this world to have a new birth ...
Incredibly written for a girl of your age....it is terrible how someone so young can see what many older ones can not ...
Keep writing Natalie , your poetry through time will speak for it's self and you will be noticed .....
This is a huge site Natalie with thousands of members , keep writing this poetry from your heart and you will soon see that many will begin to appreciate this poem for what it is .....truthful and from the heart...
I am looking forward to reading more of your work, keep up the great work