Comments : Love Has An Element

  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    'Twas inspired by a great poem first of all.
    And then this poem was excellent, short but very to the point.
    Its a very true point and I liked the flow within it.
    I loved your choice of words, and if I could correct anything I would, but to me this is excellent, feels likeyou could add a little poor because it is so great.

    Well done.x

  • 16 years ago

    by HansRik

    Silver,

    First of all, forgive me for not commenting on any of your work in a long time. I am glad I was just thinking about you, because this poem was surely exquisitely written. The brevity of the stanza gives it an 'element' of elegant eloquence.

    The imagery and diction are fantastic.

    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by HansRik

    My friend,

    In my last comment, I forgot to invite you to join YOS (Ye Olde Societee). We would be honoured to have a member like you in our club. If you have doubts, or you do not want to join, feel free to contact me.

  • 16 years ago

    by NannO

    I reli enjoye reading this poem.. short and sraight to the point.. its very strong and reli true.. beautiful idea and theme... gud rhyme too.. its also unique.. i dunno if this makes any sense, but i feel like i understand it and not at the same time.. i lyk that feeling..
    keep it up
    ur a gr8 writer
    take care
    NannO

  • 16 years ago

    by Minkus

    I'm too shallow to understand this poem, I guess, so I won't vote on it. I'll do another of yours instead.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Was a good poem and flowed well, altho i had to read it a couple of times to understand it...
    keep writing

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    Your use of words is very effective.
    Cute lil poem. Now I cannot comment on the style as I have a hard time writing in this style..so I think you did really well. Again you use uncommon or original words wich makes it a pleasure to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is a very good poem, its short, but you really made it work. I love the meaning behind it. You did a very wonderful job on this, your word usage was really good and the flow and rhythm of it was really good also. Great job on this!

  • 15 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Really well done, , really liked it,
    i love this kind of poetry and emily d ickinsons poems :)
    just to crazy that on this site one can't even write her name normally
    keep the good poetry up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Well, all i can say is wow.
    I have read all of Emily D !ckinson's poems, including 650
    you have surpassed that one.
    I don't know quite what gets me... into your poems but maybe your word use and short but meaningful lines have in depth meanings that we can never quite decipher...
    But it is incredible.
    5/5 once again
    ~yellowfeverlime