This is a heartbreaking poem.Gave me the chills. Way to go..Keep up the best writing...Lots of luck and love, Johrden

I defintly got goose bumps from this one while I was reading it. Really awesome job! I'll be coming back to read yours. Beautiful job on this one really. Keep up the good work sweetheart.

Thanks for the compliment!! I've written a couple more too. Thanks again!!!

Love, Garnet

Hey hun that was a really good poem i loved it you write really awesome. xoxo Rach

This is extremely good..ur right..i do like this one...i love sad and depressing poems

whats up?
keep it up

xoxo
elissa

That is fantastic! loved the 'Sweet Suicide.' part at the end. Just seemed so abrupt. Exellent

Joe =)