Guess what. i'm 13 too. and that is a great poem. if u have the time to look at some of my poems i would really appreciate it.
take care
~gHeTtO~

It's a great poem u just need to add on mor details and youll become a great poet

Short but to the point...I like how you did that! 5/5

Mallori

I like it 5/5 ..keep up the good work