Really really good! awesome job! lots of emotion! 5/5

Aww.. *hugs*. its awesome.. :-) i love it.. i dont think that there is one i dont like..

WOW.....

"losing conscience
hate for the self
solution so simple
shield the mind with pure apathy"

no words can describe how much i love this poem!!! the emotion speak through each line. brilliant work. keep it up!
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