Comments : My experience part 2

  • 18 years ago

    by kim

    This poem was really good!!...even for a 13 year old that was better than ne thang i have ever wrote...n me too, i was actually in a situation like that.....im friends w/ my x too but yet im still unhappy.....i used to be soo popular n i have a sister who is pretty n shes smart and shes a great cheerleader!!!as i used to be but now i find myself to be a complete loser....idont no how ive changed sooo much but i have....but u should def. keep riting it sounds really good!!!