This has alot of thought behind it.
I tthink if you put more catchy titles on your poems, they would be looked at more, and considered better.
Good poem..really makes you think to understand.

Lisa.x

Your Haiku was intristing. Remember that the syllables are 5,7,5. The first line was, second was eight or nine, then the last one was okay. (sorry if I got on your nerves in any way..) The Haiku was really great though.

Yay! very nice. (the syllables are fine)
~Sami