Very nice, keep up the good work!
~Sami

Hiya.
this was great I loved the scheme!
&Your flow was good.
It was full of emotion & told a lil story that showed us what you were trying to say.
Well done, rather good poem :P

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This was a good poem. I enjoyed the form of it, and the flow was pretty nice. Though, I would love to know more about the meaning of this poem. I feel like I am only being told one half of a story when I read this poem.

Wow, good stuff. I was looking through the titles of your poem, and I thought they were amazing. Creative stuff!..

You have some extremely creative titles, and this poem though narrative in a way I think, had such a good rhyme scheme and sorrow mixed into it. It kept my attention the whole way through.

"You told me, yesterday"
[Take out the comma. It ruins the flow]

This was a pretty good poem. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this one. I thought it was brilliant. The verses were well structured, and the words were great. I also liked the title of this one.

A lot of people find it hard to get over someone after a break-up, and it usually results in frustration and depression. This is a great way to get over someone that broke your heart. Get angry at them, and write a poem about it. Lol, well that's how I did it. Then eventually time took it's toll and I calmed down, and everything was ok. So good luck with that!.. Great poem.

Gee this is good. one of your new ones. i will give it a 5. cause in my opinion it is excellent. and other agree with me.

one word to describe it. perfect.

david