Aww.. this is cute...

Very sweet. creative n well written too...good job

What a beautiful write, this one actually gave me shivers. In your poem the emotion of true love is there, and you certainly have some original ideas.
If I were to be critical about this write all I'd say is if the wording was edited, and the same thing said with more "creative" words (a thesaurus is good for that) then it would be even more breath taking. Of course it is good as it is too.

Keep it up.

WOW!
Seriously loved it! It's so short but beautifully sweet.
Sometimes the best things are the most simple.

5/5
xxx.