Comments : Ode to someone important

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Intriguing as always. I've probably said this in every comment I've ever left you, but you write in such a unique way. I'm always at a loss for words.
    I really enjoyed this poem, but this part:

    "I was the poem that never got published,
    The cigarette you covered with filth
    A memory devoured."

    left me in a state of awe! That's just WOW!!!!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Not as good as your other stuff, but not bad by ANY means.