Pretty good. Very sweet and to the point. Always remember "Size doesnt matter", that is...in poetry ;)
Expressed very well. Keep up the good work. *JussxAxNobody*

The Flow And The rhymes Are Really Good.. And It's Got A Good Pattern.. Well Done Keep It Up. ;)

That was wicked omg good

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