A unique poem it is. I loved the way you expressed the emotions. The feelings are all hidden behind every word you wrote. Great job. Perfection needs no advise.

luv
Princess

Ultimate, just too good to be true, great wordings and spl the new pattern as it shows that u hv so much to say and thats what i liked the best abt it. in regular poem we think a lot abt how to make words flow..but here u hv let ur heart flow...great work.

all the best and take care