This is awsome

keep it up

Wow. that was a totally awesome beautiful poem. :) 5/5

I hope this doesnt happen to anyone, really nice poem i really loved it and i hope that you would give me your opinion on mine

Wow, very nice......hmmm, favorite part "ran to the bus depot
finally without a care
ask for a ticket
a ticket to anywhere... "
Love it.....see ya later