Wooow gotcha :P
that was reli sweet
bgad loved it so much, I never get bored from readin' ur work
hope u're alryt
speak t'ya soon
Lov
xxxxxxx "keep it up btw :P"

I LOVE IT...ITS VERY GOOD

I love this one too, esp the flow and truth of the first four stanzas. good concept

Wow gorgeous poem..so glad u're writing again..ive missed u!
thanks for ur comment sweetie.
Keep writing and take care k!?
xoxoxo

Dang!!! Girl, a most passionate heart
felt read indeed. All I could think of
is when will be the next time I can look
into my girlfriends loving eyes.
Thank you for sharing and Write On,
Bogie

p.s. I love this line,
the eyes speak WORDS in a single tear

This is an excellent poem. you make it flow so well, which is pretty hard with a rhyming poem. your rhyming doesnt seem forced at all. and i love the message of your poem too. very good writing. 5/5

Wow, this is really an amazing poem, loved every line and word. very nicely written indeed.

May GOD bless you

take care and all the best

Such a simple concept, and yet a fascinating poem. That last stanza, gave me shivers lol. It was just amazing. I'm impressed, I love this poem.

Another one well done! You are truely talented! Im lovin' your poems. They all show such pain and emotion thats easy to understand or relate too. Keep it up And smile =] 5/5

luv natalie x-x

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Wow!!! this is a really nice one...i love they way it is expessed, its rhymes nd at the same time it makes sense...great job..5/5 for sure