Comments : My Angel From Above

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Very good, sweet and from the heart, one suggestion though in this stanza. . .

    So to you I give my heart
    My angel, my one, my love
    Forever I am yours
    My angel from above

    i suggest you take out the first my Angel so it flows better like this

    So to you I give my heart
    my one, my love
    Forever I am yours
    My angel from above

    yeah but very well done xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Woahhhhh im in love with the last stanza....and with you lol...so that leaves me broken hearted...cos youre in love with him :P:P
    get that savings account overflowing, girl!
    bye take care
    dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    I LOVE IT!!!!! that's so great! I wish I could write that good.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Yours-Truly~*~

    Wow, this is a great poem 5/5, keep up the good work :)
    ~*~Yours-Truly~*~