I think this is a great poem, very emotional. Keep up the awesome work!

Thanks for the comment! Your poem was really good.

Omg I would be so sad!!!!!! bleh seriously nick your amazing I hope your ok, even though this is just random and yea there has to be a reason even if you don't know it , why your thinking like this. Bleh I miss you!!!

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Um...its 1130 now.....im n south carolina...i need area code so i can call u...definately tell me wen u get ur new cell phone so i can like txt or sumin....well ur @ school on this site all day? wow...i only get it uring 3rd block....um....yaeh yd is it taken away?????

elissa
luf ya

I love this poem......

literally

Thats kwel.. clever coz it makes me fink of sum ppl in my skl n how i notice them now... always take notice of the quite 1's.. thanks 4 commenting on my poem all my love.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Hey this is really good! Great Job! I loved it!

Lovely poem,keep it up

it has some nice stuff

but ,(again im not trying to be an ass)

i think this line was somewhat forced just to go with the rhyme,cuz i dont realy understand it ,maybe if you change it this poem would sound lovelier

the line
(Because they think he's so strong)

Anyways that's just my opinion
peace out \m/

Hey nick, this is really good!! hang in there tho!! if u ever need anyone to talk to im here u can email me any time kc_0420@hotmail.com i can help if u need anything cause i know what ur going through..hope 2 hear from u

ByeBye ~Kaci