Lovely!
this is not shayari exactly but ur words are wonderful and so expressing......

well done dear! keep writing

Bharti

" Is zindagi se toh chutkara mil gaya... per dil ko abhi bhi teri dard bhari yaadon se chutkara pana hai"

wow i love the words u used....again..5/5. its awsum...its pain n love too so wonderful wrk.

sonam
xoxo

Just too good, too deep and too sad, wonder how u came up with such brilliant piece.

take care and all the best