Comments : Atavistic beauty

  • 14 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    True true, people should just be themselves. Great use of words. Your flow seems to be inconsistant, but that's probably just the style. Keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Lenny

    You did stray away from your usual and yet its so like your others. It also has that sort of blur effect. Cant absorb the blur, head stop spinning. Reading again one moment... Ok, Ok got it. Maybe its not like your other work. I like this style, and reading it twice was definitely a good idea...I should do that more, anyway.. Loved it, wonderful imagery, it built up to a wonderful poem, flow-fantastic, im going to take a stab at its meaning now. It seems like its about either a conscience, someone looking at themselves and understanding themselves, a schitzophrenic, or just a sort of comprehension and understanding of yourself by looking at you and switching yous... And then it turns into a sort of allegory with a message, which would be that we need to settle with ourselves and stop letting other people influence the way we live our lives. Or something along those lines, maybe thats just what it made me think about. anyway great job, each of your pieces....lol by now you can probably finish that sentence!