Beautifully sad, this brought tears to my eyes. You capture her sadness and portray it with such vivid imagery.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

LUANNE! WOW! Brandy said it you could FEEL this poem! OMG! This has got to be one of your best written peices! Its awesome seeing you try new styles...not me, not yet! I love it love it love it!!! Your such a terrific writer no matter what you write about or how you write it!
Love you
CHels

That thingy won't let me vote...it says I already voted and I haven't....sorry because this is truly one of my favorites, everyone is right, you could feel this poem...great job Luanne...

love ya, Ann

You paint the picture perfectly with your choice of words, A+

I loved this poem my town just a a murder suicide that involved two elderly people i loved it and it almost mad me cry!
Trust_no_one

This poem is amazing you take the most powerful words to describe what u want the readers to know. its perfect i love it you did a great job!

That is different but i like it. 5/5 good job

I really like this, very interesting picture it put in my mind, job well done