Very well written, it flows nicely and the expression is clear

Well you obviously know that i loved this poem.. You are just such an amazing poet it blows me away.. your definitly one of my favorites..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Oh...so good. so sad. you are amazing.

God, this is awesome. my best guy friend killed himself a couple of months ago...i miss 'im. i love it.