Aww this poem is sooo good & full of emotion!! its so sad. i loved it!! 5/5**

Thats really good...i can understand what that might seem like...im not too fond with my parents...i have my friends...and thats all i need..but i hope things get better between u and your dad.

Oh this is so close to my heart. My daddy used to be my everything and I was his princess... please read my poem "your my hero daddy" it's so like urs... I loved the wording and how it was short and sweet but indepth as well... good job tabitha! keep it up!

Has emotion, shows sorrow that he causes you in discription.. well done

Beautifully written poem... very touvhing filled with emotion... good work !

This is one of my fav. poems b/c it really has my emotions in it

This is a poem i can honestly relate to so much. All the dads I've had seem to have something or other against me or don't notice that I'm there
Lovely work

Sondos

I liked it alot, well done. Keep it up
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Wow, thats a really hard feeling to deal with. I hope its not a real feeling, but if it is, just hang in there.

Strong
°•Thorn•°