Hey kid, dont worry
be happy..next days gonna be a lot better

lissen to simon wabbes song no worries....you'll be happy :D
cyaa keep writing

That was an amazing Poem..Good Rhyme..Good Rhythm..Great detail..all around great job..
5/5
~The Broken Man~

I liked it juls! the story and stuff but I was a bit confused about the rhyme cause it started off so strong and a prominant part of the poem and then it kinda um lol I don't know went a bit scattered. I loved it don't get me wrong but just something 4 u 2 think about hun! *hugs* catch u round Ruthie xoxo

I reaally like your work!!Come chick my out sometime if you want!!!

I enjoyed your work very much and i see a lot of people also echo my remarks,your style is fresh and to the point although you create a vast set of emotions in your work i like it a lot

Very interesting poem.

I can feel your pain and frustration in this poem.

Very well written.