Hey, well done, i did find one little mistake though

"The thought of leaving you the sorrows to grief alone"
i think Greif, should be Grieve.?
i'm not sure, but i thought i'd check.
Love

~She Died Screaming

This is another great work of you that i really enjoyed, you are one of the great writers, keep up the great work like always.
It was very long, but worth the time to read.
another 5/5 from me.

When i go to read a poem, and i see it is long, i don't really know what to expect.
The flow wasn't great but it was okay, the wording was pretty good, but it came from your heart and the emotions were captured well.
keep writing
xxxxx

Great poem!!!!! i liked it!

A beautiful piece, like all your work, your muse stays the same, but never fails to provide a good poem. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

This is great work!!
~shanny~

Great emotion!!
~shanny~

I love the passion you write your poetry with. In this particular poem, I love your style. A very nicely penned and passionate piece, 5/5.