Sweet I get to be the first to leave a comment on this page..... I got to say that I loved your word choice in this poem and the poem also flowed very well. I think you did a great job on this poem and that you have some talent as a poet.

*sighs* I can relate to this poem, lol. It's very well written, even though some lines seem cliche (1 is the most cliche I believe). But that doesn't matter because the rest of it is pure orginality and well written.

Good job,
Tony