Wow! this is a beautiful piece! i especially love the lines

"Clear are the revelations
of the storm cleansed mind,"

your diction and flawless flow most often leave me at a loss for words.

great reading!

i also must tell you that thanks to your suggestions, I did try tanka and other forms of poetry. thanks once again, for your valuable inputs and for sharing such great pieces with us!

good luck and peace
shobhana

This poem lacks something i dont know what it is although it has some good qualities i just think it missed the mark,but it wasnt bad

Awesome ... made me step back and pause. Of course the favorite part for me was "Clear are the revelations of the storm cleansed mind". You have the magical touch with words.

Beautiful poem Gary

I FEEL that one!!