Katie, This is heartbreaking, but so beautifully written!
"No dreams, no interests, no obsessions
Living in a shell which is depression"
Sad words, but perfectly written! Great poem!

5/5 WOW!! this was amazing, I loved it how you contradicted some words, "Insanity takes me, insanity grinds me into the ground
I'm screaming in silence, making no sound
I'm dying in life, yet living in death
Please be merciful lord, take my last breath" well, I loved the whole poem, but there is just something in this phrases. Great job!!!!!

Beautiful and heartfelt Katie, love ya girl!

Good poem. keep up the good work!