Aww this is great....keep it up...its amazing....

comment back and hope to talk

xoxo
elissa

Aww that was really sweet!
Thats what every girl wants to hear/read!
keep it up!
xxx Beth

Vrry sweet..love everythn abotu this poem especialyl that it shows that ever word came form your heart..good luck in your love...check otu some of my poems. thnxs

LISSA

I got chills reading this poem. it is so good ryan. it really flowed and it is so sweet. i love all your poems:) bye

Corinne

Aww. Lovely poem.

Nice use of question marks.

What do you see?
What do you feel?
Do you not think it's you?
Do you not see it real?

Gave a 5.
Good write.

xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx