Comments : Welcome to my life

  • 18 years ago

    by LE MARQUIS

    As they say. Only the ones that really been into depression know how it feels like. But words always lack in this... Although a really great piece and wise chosen word, not too long not too short... Very impressive...

    5 point added, as it should be

    LM

  • 18 years ago

    by Harley- Angel Of Despair

    I read your poem and it hit me pretty hard. I'm impressed. I think it was amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by hiddenimage

    I read that and it brought tears to my eyes b/c not only is it a 5/5 poem,but that describes my life...

  • Omg i am speechless, amazing, amazing use of the english language, so lovely

    well done
    xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by My heart crys every night

    I would love to be able to write like the way u do

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really like this poem you are an awesome writter. keep up the good work and my heart goes out to you.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie

    WOAHH! i serously think i am in
    [L][O][V][E] with this!!
    I read it over and i was like
    "woah i can relate to this alot!"
    anyone who doesn't like this poem is OUTTA THEIR MIND BECAUSE THIS IS PROBABLY THE BEST POEMS I HAVE EVER READ!
    GREAT JOB!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Moonbeam

    My poem to you angel of the darkness

    Things aren't hopeless as they see,
    Maye you are having a bad dream
    People care all around you
    Always lasting and always so true
    I will make a funny face for you to see
    I will even paint a face for you in the tree
    Please put a smile just for the day my friend
    Because life is just starting for you and is never the end
    Sure you have sorrow and pain, but it won't always last
    Your pain an sorrow in life you must cast
    Tomrrow is a new beginning,embrace it so strong
    Because my friend you in life always wi;; belong

  • 18 years ago

    by Moonbeam

    Smile for me

  • 18 years ago

    by [crimson] tearz_fall

    This is great, i feel alot of the same things you do, keep writting, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Morgan

    Hey sweetie!
    this poem was really well written. and i know that it must be very hard for you letting it all out. ive only just recently cum out of depression so i understand wat your going through. but stick with it hun. u'll get there one day (hopefully soon!)
    God bless,
    love Morgan

  • 18 years ago

    by ~masiy~_may

    Hey was good ,i think that was really good....i really felt you on this one,its good to see that you havn't given up and your still here looking for what you cant find..~1~may....

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Very good job.. you put your heart in here.. read my poems too..

  • 18 years ago

    by Zoya

    WOW!!! thas all i can say girrlll...man keepp it up..i duno if its true or not but watever it is u no how to put ur thoughts in words...u have a great talent...n u should defintly do somthin bout it...great!

    -ZOya

  • 18 years ago

    by aloneforgotten13

    Words can't describe how good this poem is

  • 18 years ago

    by sierra

    Wow i just dont know wat to say. i can feel ur pain. im workin on a poem like that right now but i have one already close to it. if u wanna c it just click on my name n go to my page. its called the price payed for my scarred heart. plz continue to write cuz ur work is ver mind-moving n it evokes thought. keep up the good work. i've added u to my favorite's list so that i can c ur poems daily. hasta pronto.

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    I LoVE DiS PaRT:
    How do you save a girl?
    Who can't save herself?
    How can you hear her
    When she silently cries for help?
    tHAT PiECE ReALLY GOT TO mE! DiS POEM iS SO TOUCHiNG! iT WAS GREAT!

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This poem is really good too! i wrote one similar to this with the same title a while back. keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    This is a really good poem i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo88

    Wow a nower great poem 5/5