Good write... my only suggestion is to not end so abruptly with a one line stanze. It's suppose to be a sad ending that can use some pauses inbetween to emphasis your feelings... You may want to try this...

and now ...
I too will be afraid
to get close
to someone
again...

Of course, that's my own opinion... Keep up the good work!

Wow that's really good. lub ur writin