Hey Sweetie, we discussed this one in the discussion boards. Make those few changes I suggested and it will flow much better. I love the feeling and emotion in this one. Well done.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Not sure if you have made the changes above ^^ but it's an excellent write. Emotional and heartfelt. :)

Oh goodness, I've only just re-read this one....... its wonderful, it reads so much better with all the changes you made, as I said before, it has feeling and emotion and its flows beautifully.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

you're welcome