All please tell me what you think bout it :)

ThanX

This poem is SO adorable! this girl is absolutely insine if she doesnt date you because id KILL for a guy as sweet as you! hope it works out!

Wowwwwwww! i agree wid ashey da poems gr8 n u lve hr soooo much itd b rng fr u nt 2wrk it out lolz she shud lve it n lve u 2 yr crazy bout hr shel see dat n fal strayt in2 yr arms (fingers crosd) lolz

Omg!! i agree with ashley! i would kill for a guy like you, anyday!! and she really is crazy if she doesnt go back to you!! this poem was one of the best i've ever read im my life!! you totally have to tell us what happenes!!! :D

Good poem! I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up, and thanks for commenting on my poems!

Hey awesome poem hun! I realy enjoyed it. Good luck with it and I'm with telling her the truth bud. *hugs* good luck

Ruthie xoxo

Aww.. well i really hope that you end up with her. you seem like a really nice guy and i cnt come up with a good reason why anygrl wouldnt like you....good luck!!! 5/5

You know i never get tired of reading it...lol..its great!!

Its long but it a nice. i give it a 10. +_+