U hv simply shocked me with this one, its too touchy and u hv just penned it so damn beautifully.
m so glad that u hv joined this site and i could sense the talent u hv.

keep it up dear and take care of urself
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This poem was very intense. Very well written. Thank you for sharing. Its from a unique prospective.
AmberMoonstone

That is a lovely poem. I feel very strongly about this issue and your portray it so well. You're very talented I can see by reading your first poem. Keep it up, and welcome to the site. I wish you alot of success. :-)

Thank you for your sweet comment.

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Michelle

Marvellous........great job.
its so touching......a great poem wid a lovely msg.

u hav the talent dear..
keep up ur gud work

Bharti