A very interesting and different write. Nice job.

Well what to say about such a poem like this? Read it, felt it, lived it, got blown away by it and now recovering from the consequences. lol....

A true masterpiece indeed.

Lots of Love
Michelle

Hmm.. different, but great. I love it. The arrangement is something different, but it suits the writing:) another great job, keep it up.

Monique

Oh my god this poem is amazing, like all of ur others are but this one is one of my faves...keep up the good work 5/5
xox
Kristen

I think you should get a book published!! i m sure it'll be a grand success. it superb!!!

I think you should get a book published!! i m sure it'll be a grand success. it superb!!!

Lovely.......this is all i can say abt this one. i loved the last line

"Screaming
If you could hear voice of my tears"

good job.
Bharti

The title is exceptionally good, Nitin! The flow is smooth and your choice of words are simply great.

great job!!!

shobhana

This is so beautiful and profound.. it ran deep in my heart.. very nicely written and the rhyme was gr8.. i especially loved the last part.. and ur title was very catchy..
keep it up
NannO

This is so beautiful and profound.. it ran deep in my heart.. very nicely written and the rhyme was gr8.. i especially loved the last part.. and ur title was very catchy..
keep it up
take care
NannO

Man, u r totally awesome, I really luv it Nitin, can't believe it, ur poems r a masterpiece of its own...

Nitin
Again your writing moves me. You have so much talent. Imagery in this piece is wonderful.

Screaming
If you could hear voice of my tears

You did hear the voice of someone's tears ;)
Love Cindy