This was so heartbreaking to read and your words are powerful! Great job!

Great poem. 5/5 keep writing

You did it again Luke.... wooooo hoooo! Keep on writing and getting out all the emotion, it truly helps and remember, your new found family is here for you. Very heartfelt write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Now i am against suicide now but it still was good though

This is a fairly good poem,less words,more meaning ,simple enough

i like the last two verses,but you might need to work more one the first ones

Wow...this is good.......i love it...i wish i could really write as good as you