Hey d. its me.... i wish i would have known.ur like my sis. call me k. love ur best friend em.

Awww that is so sad. I wish I could say I know how it feels but we all deal with pain in a different way.

I absolutely think you are an AWESOME writer and i really hope that this didn't happen but if it did i realize there is nothing i can say to change it or make you feel better but i am truly sorry.
xxKaylaXX

This peice is very expressive with a clear plot. really sorry this had to happen to you if it did

It saddens me how often we hear of these things now days.
I know nothing I can say is going to help the anger and hurt go away..it will in time, trust me...been there, done that. (for me it was my uncle, not my brother)
If you are interested, you can read my poem "Forever Changed" It truly helped me write about it and just get it off my chest.
I'll keep you in my prayers :)
Take care!

Awwww I can relate a lot to this in a way...It is very sad and very tragic not something any girl should have to go through i loved this poem tho! you spoke your heart and that is what truly matters.

It is a great poem but so sad, im sorry if it happened for real.
you have great talent.

After reading your previous poem I am glad the focus of this one shifts.

I hope you sit in jail
For the longest time
Or the least you could do is
Crawl in a hole and die.

I really liked these lines but especially love the last 2

But now I am stronger
And no longer living in complete hell

Keep strong and stay writing you have great talent.

Your brother?!? Hell!!!! I hope he rots in jail too. And I'm glad your mother believed you and did something about it, unlike mine who's too afraid of change and still living with the molesting little ******.