Yeah I better be your desperate Dawn!
Great poem lala! Your the bomb!

My Layla... so talented.
"Desperate Dawn- your beauty collides with the stars"
oh how i love this... but love you even more.

keep up the excellent work, my dear.

Cool! I love it :) the first 2 lines did it for me.

Excellent work it brings me the reader into the poem and the discriptive language is just wonderful and smooth.

Beautiful descriptions of words and great dition. well done on this one.

good luck and peace
shobhana