Comments : An innocent lonely thought

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Plz edit ur poem as it is having errors due to the problem in site, just re-type the effected words

    This mischievous night then
    Leaves me with some dreams��.
    That makes me falterâ?¦
    I then stop and think for a while
    When will I fall in love????
    With no answer to this silly question
    I just shrug and simply smileâ?¦.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, thats again a very cute poem, spl the second stanza.

    u hv just very beautifully xpressed ur emotions, liked it.

    always make sure of viewing ur own poem after posting it as this spelling thing happens while using spl characters.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This one is great too. Keep writing.

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Very heart touching and its really nice.....

    take care
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by thiswas2006

    Purva......This poem is really beautiful.
    I loved it.You sure do have a wonderful talent in ur hands......
    Keep it up..
    Kuttan