Omg this is soo sweet i totally luv it i wish i could write a poem like tht but ill juzz stick 2 my life poems newayz as b4 ttys bye

~*~Luv Kiah~*~

Awww this is gorgeous, well done levi

When you said I wouldn't regret reading this (which I don't) I thought it would be something so outstanding that I would be speechless...and as you can see I'm still talking.
This was ok, an average poem really. Nothing really "new" but the flow was good and the beginning few lines I really liked. The ending was rather sudden though and it felt like there were something missing.
Touching poem nonetheless.

The ending just seems a bit rushed where it could have been so full of detail. Good effort because it's hard to write a love poem of any kind. 4/5

Hey great poem. i liked it.. the ending was alittle.. off. but still a pretty good poem. keep it up
dee

Great poem 5/5 if only well all had someone like that.....that will never happen:(....but really great poem
auna