This is great at the start but it sortof loses the oint of it after a while but otherwise good:)

Good job, i like this alot x

This Poem Is Soo Sad.. And It's Soo True And Deep.. I Love It..

Good poem it's so sad, I can really ralate, good job.
Becca x

I liked it, you get the feel of how bad the person in the poem is feeling. good stuff.

I suggest you read "i can not escape" By rolyat, she's a close friend of mine that forgot her password, but i think you'll lik it.

I like it.sexy keep it up :)

Aww what a sad poem very well written and it clearly describer what you felt you are so good 5/5