Comments : Tell me

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Nicely done. Keep up the good work and keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allisha Fox

    Its good. and i know how you feel i am going through that right now too.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl an0ther g0od p0em g0od j0b

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Love how the rhymes in your poems don't seem forced and how it feels that you mean every word of this one. Other than that, wish I could tell you how to improve but I just don't know how it could be better!

  • 18 years ago

    by newlun

    This poem is awesome. keep it up