Hey thats a very good poem 5/5
keep up the good work

Wow! That's amazing Bill... You've written some wonderful, breath taking, heartfelt poems lately... Loving it :)

You are one of the best poets on this site. I love reading your work, and I not ashamed to say it. it feels as if you are talking directly to you reader. Which ever girl that has you is one lucky girl! lol Great poem

Will they stay gone forever?
I may never really know
Let us find out together?
Reaping what we sow

my favourite :)
5/5