Comments : First Kiss

  • 18 years ago

    by Ella

    I don't know what youd do without me, thanx i love you and that kiss was great lol; jk

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WOW!!!! that is sooooooo good like really. Good Job girl I love your writing, you really have a great talent n you know how to use it. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    True emotion, this is wonderful.

    U realy express yourself well, its is comforting that people still know what love is in a world turned cold!

    Keep up the good work, it is all very good!

    Jon

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I love it, hun! It's discribed perfectly! lol!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Martin

    This is very sweet and full of love. I like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow
    i love it
    reminds me of my boyf
    wicked job

    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Beautiful babe