I'm totally diggin' this poem! I love your style and wow this is so true! Awesome work, I love it!

Omg Tim !
When I read this I had to giggle a little ..... very cute .....

Although I'm not that old , yet not a teenager either ...I could just so see me giving my hubby a smack upside his head if he looked ....LMAO

This is just... LOL... Yep, you've nailed this one. The little details of the beach, mingled with the BIG teenage details... Superb!

Um......interesting..

xoxo
elissa

At first I thought you might be kind of gross b/c I saw how old you were and the title of your poem. It made me to remember never judge a book by it's cover! :) that's happend to me so many times, b/c i'm a teenager and guys look at me like that. even when i'm in stores and stuff. it makes me feel bad some times b/c i know they have a wife. Sometimes, the wife's even right there and the STILL stare! i hope everyone knows that lust is a sin even if you're not married! ha. great poem tho. I could picture it so well.
~Monique
aka
Killa Kis$~

You speak only the truth....I almost felt like I was at the beach....lol
Awesome once again!

Yo. That was the bomb. haha. i had to laugh a little bit. like i said read my poetry and tell me what u honestly think. Dont just say it was good, actually give me tips if u have some cuz i like ur style of write.
[theo]