Comments : As I Lay

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    There are no words to describe the beauty of this poem. I am in love with the end, and the whole poem itself. I love the message and the feeling u wrote it with. It's amazing!!!! You honestly have true talent!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Something has a hold of me

    Yeah and i told you guys that i didn't write it and that you all have read it if you read that thing i wrote above it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Something has a hold of me

    I do like this poem though. it is very good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrew

    Good poem good work!